E4N [Persuasion]#219

Well, I'm totally convinced that our eye scan system is more secure in comparison to

your current system where a code is needed. There's no doubt that you can find out

someone else’s code, but you can’t copy the patterns of their

eyes. If someone gets hold of a security code, they can go

anywhere they want in your company. Trust me, with our system they

won’t be able to do that.

Well, here's another great thing about eye scan system is its flexibility. You can

decide which employees have access to which parts of the

building. On top of that you can not only control entry to all parts of the

building, but also control access to your computer system.

How does that sound to you?

Good job, Vlada!)

…There's no doubt that our eye scan system is more secure in comparison to your current system where a code is needed.

Basically, you can find out someone else’s code, but you can’t copy the patterns of their eyes.

Everyone knows that if someone gets hold of a security code, they can go anywhere they want in your company.

I'm totally convinced that with our system they won’t be able to do that.

Well, here's another great thing about our eye scan system that it is flexible.

According to this, you can decide which employees have access to which parts of the building.

Not only do you control entry to all parts of the building, but you also control access to your computer system.

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How does that sound to you?

Overall, good job, Aksana!)

I'm totally convinced that our eye scan system is more secure in comparison to your current system where a code is needed.

There is no doubt that you can find out someone else’s code, but you can’t copy the patterns of their eyes. Actually,

if someone gets hold of a security code, they can go anywhere they want in your company. Trust me, with system they won’t

be able to do that.

Not only that, another advantage of eye scan system is its flexibility. You can decide which employees have access to which parts of the building. On top of that, you can not only control entry to all parts of the building, but also control access to your computer system.

Well done, Kirill!

Task 2

…Well, our eye scan system is more secure in comparison to your current system where a code is needed. You can find out someone else’s code, but you can’t copy the patterns of their eyes. If someone gets hold of a security code, they can go anywhere they want in your company. With our system they won’t be able to do that.

Another advantage of eye scan system is its flexibility. You can decide which employees have access to which parts of the building. You can not only control entry to all parts of the building, but also control access to your computer system.