TheodoreB1

Well done Theodore!

You used the plans and the notes.

You should write more examples and explantions.

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Some people believe that teenagers can do a great deal to protect the environment. However, not everyone agrees.

On the one hand, teenagers don't have time to help the environment. For example, they have to worry about the tests at school, they must read all day and there isn't enough time for other things.

On the other hand, teenagers can help to protect the environment because they don't have so busy a schedule as adults. For instance, they can help to clean the near park or the school garden by volunteering.

To sum up teenagers can help the environment but it depends on how do they use their time. Therefore, I believe that teenagers can do a great deal to protect the environment.

Great job Theodore!

You used the plan, the notes and the vocabulary from the student's book.

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Dear editor,

I am writing about the plan to build an indoor swimming pool at our school in place of the cafeteria. As a student, I think it is not a good idea for the school to have an indoor swimming pool instead of a cafeteria.

In my opinion, a swimming pool in the school ground is not necessary so it will not have benefit. First of all, students will not have a place to eat their food. Furthermore, there are public pools nearby that students can use. Doing this students would have no indoor space to hang out during the breaks.

To sum up, students will not have an indoor space to hand out during their breaks and they will not have a place to buy food. For these reasons, I am against the plan to build a swimming pool.

Yours faithfully,

Kavakidis Theodore

Who's=who is

whose=their

You should have written a few things about the plot.

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You should have used more examples and explanations.

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<The End Of The Wolrd> is a fantastic science fiction film that the main characters are tree soldiers who's names are Michael, Konstantin and Jim.

The story takes place into a city of U.S.A and it is about a war beetween humans and aliens.

One of the best things about the film is the part of the movie that the giant spaceship of aliens distroid by humans and some parts of it fell on the earth.An other thing that I realy like are the smart jokes that Michael said.

This is a film that teenagers will enjoy but fans of science fiction films will enjoy every minute of this film.

There are many important people in my life, but there is one person I especially admire.

Let me tell you about my mum. She is the kind of person who work very hard to achieve her goal.

What I admire more about her is that she is always there to help me.

She is also very kind and she make a lot time for us.

To sum up, l admire her because she is very hardworking and kind.

I love my mum very much!!!!!! 🥰

Be more careful with details.

feel-felt-felt

fall-fell-fallen

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It was the day of school talent competition and I have been practicing for weeks.I was very exited but a little nervous because it was my first time.

Before the competition starts I looked the other contestants, they looked more talented than me.I thought that my talent wasn't so interesting like the other.when it was the time to go to the state I said [hello ladies and gedlemens] then I start solving my rubic cupe.

I was solving it so fast that it felt down.I feel very embarrased.One of

my friends came over gave me the cupe.

Unexpectedly the judges gave me top marks.Then I thought that I am so lucky to have this good friend.

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Your idea is great.

...sounds nice.

why don't you organise a spa party.

in my opinion

Be more careful with spelling mistakes.

Use more full stops.

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yeet

I like the post with space because it has a lot of things about it.

1. If I were an animal I`d be a cat.

2. If I were a food or drink I`d be a hot dog.

3. If I were a moment in time

I`d be summer.

       Theodore kavakidis