(Fabian Maturrano Kut)
• (topic sentence) Now a days, talking about that a new holiday isn't a real holiday, is a topic of discusion, because; in my opinion, usually is a commercial strategy.
(supporting reason) The day of "pollo a la brasa" is a good example of it, because is a day created in Peru for peruvians to take that day and go to a chicken restaurants.
(conclusion) So it's better to keep the really important holidays and, if there is the posibility to get new holidays, it would be nice if is only an important holiday.
• (topic sentence) Actually some holidays are not very important now, I agree with some that exist right now because we should remember what important people did before to have this life we are having but there are some holidays that are just too old.
(supporting reason) Also there are new people that is doing important stuff that affect us and they don't get a recognition like older holidays does right now.
(conclusion) It's important to recognize what people does right now and would be nice to put off really old and non-important holidays and put on new holidays.