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Its very importand to keep all of old holiday customs, In my opinion - I agree, it is very important to maintain our customs because it is part of our culture and keep our old traditions, in conclusion, ours' culture and tradition are part of our ancestors.

- our country should start a new holiday and i agree since it would be a day to spent time with the family and the important thing is to do other types of activities with the family. in conclusion we have to take advantage of the holiday.

 

Leonaldo Mendoza

Elena Olivares

4. People spend too much money on Holidays.

 

 

Yes, I agree because people are always looking for new places to relax.

 

Usually people visit different places every year, depending on money and time.

 

Traveling is very good and helps you to be stress free.

Jhurget Daniel Cabrera Z.

1. A new holiday isn't a real holiday.

I desagree visited new place because you try have new experiences but you don't know the dangerous in your holiday.

Discover new things could be a litle complicated or perhaps it's be magnificent because some people don't know how it will be.

To prevent this situacion it's important know your climate , custorms.

 

 

 

 

I agree people spend too much money on holidays because some people spend more money than they have just for a day of celebration as a result of which they end up in debt.

People shouldn't spend too much money on a holidays.

 Milagros

(Fabian Maturrano Kut)

• (topic sentence) Now a days, talking about that a new holiday isn't a real holiday, is a topic of discusion, because; in my opinion, usually is a commercial strategy.

(supporting reason) The day of "pollo a la brasa" is a good example of it, because is a day created in Peru for peruvians to take that day and go to a chicken restaurants.

(conclusion) So it's better to keep the really important holidays and, if there is the posibility to get new holidays, it would be nice if is only an important holiday.

 

• (topic sentence) Actually some holidays are not very important now, I agree with some that exist right now because we should remember what important people did before to have this life we are having but there are some holidays that are just too old.

(supporting reason) Also there are new people that is doing important stuff that affect us and they don't get a recognition like older holidays does right now.

(conclusion) It's important to recognize what people does right now and would be nice to put off really old and non-important holidays and put on new holidays.

Choose two statements and give your opinion using the expressions given.

 

Write your paragraphs considering:

Topic sentence

Supporting ideas

Conclusion

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