FIRST JOBS

Good job, Valentina!

Nice job! Congrats, dear Diego!!

It seems you need to read again before posting. There are some repeated words!

Nice job!

Congrats, dear Sofi!!

Anyway check this structure:

*She started working at ...

Nice job!

*We write the days of the week in capitals letters in English.

Congrats, dear Brenda!!

My daddy's first job! :)

My dad worked in CFS as support engineer in Caracas , Venezuela .

He usually started at 8 am until 6 pm , he wore jeans and t-shirt , sometimes suits and ties .

He enjoy work there!!!

 Also he learned too

much there.

Valeria González

My dad worked in the insurance company Rimac in San Isidro, Lima. He was a manager. He usually started at 8 am and finished at 7pm. He wore formal clothes: a white shirt, dark trousers and a black suit. He was kind with all the workers and he was very neat. My dad did like his job but he came home very late.

Nicolas Cisneros

My mom's first job

My mom was a cook of a restaurant in San Isidro, Lima from 2006 to 2011. She started at 6 o'clock and she finished at 9 o'clock.

Everybody was talented and kind, it was the best group.

She wore a double-breasted jacket, chef’s hat, black trousers and shoes.

She liked her job but it was very difficult for her, because she works in the restaurant and at the same time be with me and my brother. But in a future, she could try again…

Jimena Flores

My dad worked in an ice cream shop called Grido, he started at 2:30 pm and fished at 6'o clock pm. from mondays to friday. He thinks that work there was very confortable because in the hot days he could cool off and he only had to wear a white apron. He realy liked and enjoyed the work.

Brenda Campos

My mum worked in Unysis of Peru, My mum first job

The first job of my mum is in Unysis of Peru, remained in the distric of San Isidro. She started at 9am and finished at 5 pm.

He wore a casual clothes. My mum enjoyed a lot her work because it her first career and her knew his husband.

My mom worked as a waitress in a restaurant. She started work at 12pm and finished at 6pm. She wore a white blouse and a red skirt along with a black apron with white stripes. His boss was a bit mean but the other people were cool. She really enjoyed her job.

My mom worked in a movie theater. She started work at 1 o'clock and finished at 9 o'clock. She didn't make a lot of money, but the people were very nice and she liked her companions. My mom really likes her work because she could watch movies for free.

SOFIA VIVAS

My dad worked in a school in Comas, Lima. He was a primary teacher. He usually started at 8 am and finished at 4 or 5pm. He wore formal clothes: a white shirt, dark trousers and a tie. Everybody was friendly but he was very tired since he spent the day teaching all the subjects. He enjoyed a lot his work because he loved children.

Teacher Kate

Bryan, good job! Interesting facts about your daddy! Well done in vocabulary, past forms and punctuaction as well!!! :)

My dad worked in ultra sound engineer inspects pipes in holland.He was a manager.He usually started at 7 am and finished at 9pm.He work clothes.My dad did like his job.

Bryan Dirksen Garcia

Daniela, good job!

Nice first experience of your mom!

Be careful, we say "jackets", not "sacks". The word sacks can be for grains: Sacks of grains but for clothes we use jacket or coat if it is longer.

Dear Carlos, good!

Anyway next time you should revise th rubric of evaluation before posting, that way you can include all the required elements.

Be careful with the verb "wear", its past form is "wore"

Camila, nice job!

I see your mom had a really nice experience there!

Check this verb:

She "wore" casual clothes.

Dear Valeria, good job! I see he enjoyed the experience a lot!

Very nice, Nicolás! Good job!

Dear Jimena! Nice job! Congrats!

I know your mom will get it in the future!

My daddy's first job! :)

Nice job, Michelle!

Congrats, dear!!

Nice job! Don´t forget to use past verbs to write about a past experience.

Congrats, dear Vale!!

Nice job!

Congrats, dear Laura!!

Nice job! Don´t forget to use past verbs to write about a past experience.

Congrats, dear Ale!!

My mom work in a hospital in Lima, Perú. She is a medic. She usually started at 8 am and finished at 6:30 or 9pm.

She wore casual clothes: a neutral or colorful shirt, jeans or black trousers and a gown. She loves her job, but sometimes it´s tired for her, but she really enjoy her job.

Alexia De La Cruz Bulnes

My mom's first job was as a legal specialist. She worked in the judiciary of Peru in the courts of public law.She started work at 8:00am and finished at 4:45pm.She was earn a regular salary, it wasn't much or so little, it was what was necessary.She wore formal clothes, a set of sacks and trousers, her clothes were always neutral colors such as blue, brown, black, gray and white.She was nervous at first because it was a first experience, but she loved the job, the people were very friendly.

Mi mom worked in a minning exploration company. She was a tecnical drawinning. Since she was still in college, she started at 9 a.m. and finished at 3 p.m., after that time she went to classes and studied until 9 or 10 p.m. She wore smart casual, usually a blouse and a jean.

As weird as it sounds, she would draw on a computer and then print the drawing to give to people who will need it.

She really enjoyed it because she learned more about mining, business and learned to earn a living by working hard.

Michelle Chumpitazi

My mom worked in the Provincial Secretary of Salta and she worked since 2002 until 2004 and

she worked as assistant of chief. She started work at 9 o'clock and she finished at 1 o'clock. My mom used a computer and she used casual clothes. My mom worked in 2002 to 2004. She loved it because she gained a lot of experience.

Camila Cruz

My mom worked in a hotel in Miraflores,Lima.She weared a blue uniform and she worked form 7 o'clock to 4 o'clock.

My dad's first job was as an engineer, he Works in a Factory in Huacho. He worked from 9 a.m to 5p.m.

He wore an a uniform. He love it, he enjoy his work too much, he made many Friends.

Valeria García.

My dad's first job:

In the first work of my dad, he managed the restaurant of the swimming - pool at the Okinawan Society of Perú. During labor days he started to work at eight a.m. and he finished at eight p.m. but in weekends he started at seven a.m. and he finished at 12 a.m. He wore a short, a Tee-shirt and tennis. He enjoyed his work because he met a lot of new people and ate a lot of Japanese food.