9/24/21 #3

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Attention employee we are going to start to having a casual Friday because it will raise morale and boost productivity.

Great job!

from today --> starting today

we are encourage --> we are encouraging

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Hi dear coworkers.

I am glad to announce that Casual Friday starts on 24th September in our office. Now we can wear casual clothes every Friday. I believe that it will save a little energy, express your individuality and feel a little relaxed to finish the week with a high productivity and in a great mood. I hope you are excited and will enjoy the casual friday.

Happy Friday all of us!

Today we have some great news for our coworkers, from today we are encourage our "casual Friday" so, we can start wearing jeans and more comfortable dress code, don't forget to keep our corporative image!!!

a very good news --> very good news

the most of the --> most of the

"Casual Friday". --> "Casual Friday." (comma inside quotes)

more comfortable --> a more comfortable

Good evening to everyone!

We have a very good news. We are officially having “Casual Friday” which means you can wear more casual clothes every Fridays.

I hope the most of the employees like this idea of having “Casual Friday”. Even you don’t like the idea, I highly recommend to all people just give it try. Because it has a lot of benefits that helps us.

Starting with this new rule, I hope we can create more comfortable work environment and warm community in our workplace.

Thank you for supporting all the ideas. We will always try our best to improve our work place and employees satisfaction.

Sincerely,

Management team :)

You are the manager of a business/organization and want to start a casual Friday. Write a note/announcement to your employees explaining why and how to convince them.