Essay draft

It is a fact that enviroment plays an important role for humanity, all humans we are dependent on the environment for food, air, water, and other needs. Therefore, it is important for every human to save and protect our home.

But human activities are the main cause of environmental degradation and a big proportion of humans do not care about this problem and continue to harm the environment more and more. They are unaware that if the only planet that is habitable so far is damaged forever, we will have nowhere else to live.

The main human activities causing damage to the environment are: overpopullation, pollution, deforestation and others. I think, in a future, the world is going to experience conditions that are going to be worse. As a result, the forthcoming generations might not get access to many resources.

In my opinion, it is important to maintain the balance between natural resources. The government can take stricter measures against pollution. It’s time for humans to come together and work to improve our environment. By adapting environmentally friendly or sustainable development methods, we can be cautious about saving our environment and making progress.

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Brianna Tejada

The heat is getting stronger every year, the world is projected to have warmed an average of 2°C, or 3.6°F, by around 2040. Clearly, this is due to global warming and since we do nothing to stop it, so for the heat to be less annoying it is important to collaborate with the environment protection through home energy policy.

One way is by replacing the heating systems, most of them use fossil fuels from the earth which means that has a great negative impact, thats why the use of eco-friendly heating systems is necessary, using a solar heating system can last longer and generate emissions savings that exceed the CO2 produced by manufacturing its replacement. In this case if we want more people to use this type of system, the government should be in charge of implementing these solar systems in every neighborhood.

Talking about solar systems, A better idea of using sunlight instead of the use of fossil bones, is through solar panels that not only help provide energy for heating but also for the entire house, like I already said goverment should be installing this type of systems, not only becuase they are very expensive,also for the reason that they are eco-efficient.

In my jugdement, the use of solar panel systems will help the environment a lot by having less CO2, also they are more profitable and durable, caring for the planet is everyone's task, that is why it is important that the government give importance to the greenhouse effect and how we can make the change.

Stefany Auris Group 4

Environmental protection aims to protect natural resources and, interestingly, can also do so through a national energy policy.

There are different ways to do this, such as subsidized solar panels, free insulation, or replacement heating systems. Installing subsidized solar panels is a convenient way, but these solar panels take years to pay for themselves.

The objective of these processes is to try to conserve natural resources and repair some parts of the environment that are possible to save. Due to the biophysical environment that is permanently degraded by the excessive consumption of artificial energy, the increase in population and the rapid development of technology. This can be stopped if the government of the most affected countries plans strategies to restrict these activities that are carried out without control.

As I see it. With pollution increasing every year and causing the deterioration of the environment, it is necessary to take measures to protect the natural environment. Political measures should be taken to restrict activities that are causing damage to the environment. A secure future depends on the environment as a whole.

In my opinion ducted hot air is a type of heating system where hot air passes through a unit and must be replaced by cold air from outside. This would be a very useful and conventional type of domestic energy..

Stephany Gonzales Huaman

It is a fact that home energy policies help to reduce energy consumption. For example, regulations on the correct use of household appliances, energy codes for buildings, among others, are implemented. That is why it is important to disseminate such measures in our country.

Firstly, subsidised solar panels would be a good option to protect the environment by saving energy. In addition, I consider it necessary and mandatory for governments to implement this alternative. They have an obligation to guide us as a country and to see what is in our best interest.

Secondly, another measure that we can apply is free insulation as this would help to prevent the passage of heat, electricity or sound in or out, especially by surrounding or covering. This would also give year-round comfort, reduce cooling and heating bills.

In conclusion, in my point of view subsidised solar panels together with free insolation would be a good measure to protect our environment and bring many benefits which would not only be good for our environment but also for our lifestyle.

Arturo Pascual Pomar

The environment can influence everything, this may be in a good or bad way, we all have the duty to care for the environment and be eco-friendly.

First we have to think how we could help, because we may have the desire but if we don’t know how it will only remain in words. we must start with ourselves, in our houses, with our family, install solar panels, some of this kind of panels are subsidized by the government, and it depends on the country but is not difficult to get a panel, this will help you to save money and to care the environment, also we have the free insulation, this is going to help you to use less energy so the taxes are going to get down.

The replacement heating systems have to be replaced, the ducts carry warm air and it's understandable for people who really need it but even they are very dangerous for our health and the environment. The people says “the solar panels take decades to pay for themselves” and they have a reason but we also have to think in what kind of environment our loved ones are going to live, a cold or heat building help nobody?, helps to our environment, and indirectly helps to our childrens, animals, and ourselves.

In my opinion if the government doesn’t help, we may start doing it by ourselves, the change start with us, never is too late to help, personally i think that the solar panels are a good idea to help, because, we decrease consumption of energy and we save money, using less energy we pay less taxes to the departments in charge.

however, it’s time for a change, think about what kind of environment we are going to leave for our kids, brothers or sisters, offer advices, believe and show how we are going to do it, but, to begin we must do it with ourselves.

Group: 05

Tito Bada, Cesar

The earth is getting sick, every day humans damage the environment without knowing that if this continues to happen we will not be able to avoid the destruction of our home and the animals with which we share our home. To avoid this, we have to start at home.

Firstly, changing the use of electricity to solar energy through solar panels because it is a device that generates renewable energy and likewise, it is not harmful to the planet. In addition, people with low economic status would also benefit from saving a lot of money. This would reduce poverty and improve the environment, so government should think about the environment and provide people living in the cerros with their own solar panel.

Another way to help the environment is to stop using heating systems, as these machines have been shown to generate more than 2 tons of carbon dioxide. As a result, the carbon dioxide generated damages the earth’s ozone layer, making the climate and people’s health worse. However, it can use the panels as mentioned above to generate heat inside the home, so also, in summer season people can take cold water baths and open windows to ventilate the house. This would lead to a healthy lifestyle for the environment.

In view of the above, I believe that if we want to help the environment, we have to start at home first and demand that the government cooperate with the environment.

classmate oscar

I think you can name in the first paragraph the two points that you will explain

classmate Oscar

I think that in the first paragraph you can name the two points that you will explain.

Canchari Rosas, Carol Grupo 4

The exponential growth of pollution on our planet is not in doubt, and we must do something to help our beautiful planet.

Firstly, solar panels do not emit greenhouse gases, so they do not contribute to global warming and are currently used in both industrial and domestic applications. Because of the many economic benefits they have, they also provide us with many benefits for the protection of the environment.

Secondly, the replacement heating system has measures that allow you to heat your home in a more environmentally friendly way. This type of heating helps to reduce indoor and urban pollution, thus reducing respiratory diseases and improving people's quality of life.

In my opinion what would help the environment is the use of solar panels because they do not emit greenhouse gases and are used mostly in industries, as well as in homes, with this type of solar panels we are taking care of our environment.

Hello, Geraldine. I like the structure of your paragraphs, I consider what Stephany said as well.

Dear Jesus

I think you should detail more the first paragraph, introduction. In the conclusion you can state better your opinion

Stephany Gonzales

Hi, Geraldine. I suggest you add more ideas in your first paragraph, which would be the introduction.

Stephany Gonzales

Hi, Cielo. I suggest you add to your essay linkers such as: In addition, it is my belief that, to sum up, among others.

replace the word opinion, try to start with another words apart from " in my judgement, I think, etc"

Gricel Aponte Valle

There are many ways to encourage more people to be more environmentally friendly in their energy use and production.

For one thing, on the subject of solar panels, a lady was heard in the debate saying, "Solar panels take decades to pay for themselves!". However, thanks to subsidies for installing solar panels it is possible to achieve savings of up to 50%. This type of support allows photovoltaic energy to reach a greater number of households and thus care for the environment.

The option of self-consumption of part or all of the energy needed in a home involves a significant investment. For this reason, it is important that the state provides support to reduce expenses and achieve considerable savings.

Another option that was discussed in the debate was the replacement heating system and in one part of the debate, we heard "Heating old and cold buildings does not help anyone". However, the replacement heating system has many benefits as they do not need installation and they generate clean energy as they do not emit fumes or odors.

In my opinion, it is important that we are more environmentally responsible because it is a benefit for everyone, as this helps to ensure the balance of a long and good quality life for all species living in the world.

Pantigoso Juan

Dear Cesar it seems to me, you don't have a conclusion paragraph and in your second paragraph I think you are repeating talking about the heating system.

Pantigoso Juan

Dear Arturo. You may check your first paragraph, and your connectors and separate the paragraphs with an extra space.

I suggest revising the term 'Land' in the first line and maybe joining the last two paragraphs together.

Oscar Nuñez Marroquin (Grupo 1)

Without a doubt, environmental protection is the responsibility of everyone on the planet. However, many people are unconcerned about this and disregard it, thus, I'd like to discuss some points on how you can protect the environment through home energy policies.

Firstly, One way to protect the environment is to use alternative energies, of which solar panels are one of the most notable. However, not everyone can afford one for their home because long-term investment does not appear to be very profitable, so it is critical that through the support of governments, which have more resources to achieve this, you can begin to opt for this type of cleaner energy.

Secondly, as previously stated, it is important that people be able to insulate their homes, because through free insulation, people will be able to save a lot of money by replacing their heating system, in addition to collaborating with environmental care because this would help to reduce the use of heating in some homes during the winter and therefore reduce their energy consumption.

From my point of view, we can all contribute to environmental protection by changing many of our habits, but in order to make a significant difference, It is necessary to communicate with the authorities in order for them to devise a strategy for implementing environmental protection policies.

Hi, Lisset, I suggest you write more about replacing heating systems and add more words to get to the required amount.

Jhonatan Espinoza Group 4

The use of Subsidized solar panels have important benefits and also give us some advantages such as:

First, it is an energy available all over the planet, and Peru is one of the countries with the highest degree of solar radiation, which offers a great potential for its use in homes, companies, or institutions.

It contributes to sustainable development: it is a clean and environmentally friendly energy that reduces pollution and helps in the fight against climate change and the greenhouse effect.

Promotes research and innovation development to achieve improvements in current photovoltaic systems.

It offers great versatility thanks to its modules and is adaptable to different spaces.

It promotes an education based on respect and care for the environment for children, continuously betting on a future with sustainable values.

Solar energy does not diminish the quality of the soil or the air, on the contrary, it has no negative effects, but increases the value of your home and allows economic savings in the electricity bill.

Finally, the lifetime of solar panels is 25 years, so the initial investment to take advantage of this energy resource is profitable.

Nowadays the heating systems changed in benefit to our planet, for example, this type of heating helps to reduce indoor and urban pollution, thus reducing respiratory diseases and improving people's quality of life.

Inocente Salbatier Alonso Kai (Group 2)

There are many ways to support the environment, and not only directly, but also, we can send our support from home. One of these ways is to save energy, nowadays we use energy for almost every activity in our daily routine, from cooking to studying, and most of the people use energy as much as they can, and they aren’t aware about how much this can be harmful with the environment.

The first option is to use subsidized solar panels, this results to be very efficient if you want to stop using the expensive energy produced by big machineries, this will provide you unlimited energy as far as it lasts. This is an option that also will make us save our money, and to take advantages of the solar energy.

The second one is to replace heating systems, many people have opted for using this because it’s available for use at many places, but these machines for heating systems are being an actual pollution producer product, because just by turning on heating, it intensifies the emission of carbon dioxide. This should be replaced by biomass boilers, a type of heating that only use organic waste, so we can stop using other types of fuels instead.

Many of these products may be expensive, and the people will probably prefer to keep using the traditional energy and heating systems, but we must change our mind and find a solution to stop the pollution that is sadly increasing day by day because of our choices and needs.

Joaquín and Fabiola

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Essay regarding Energy pollution

Hello everyone present to this debate, i wanted to Talk about something really important we must take into consideration.

Our environment is heavily polluted nowadays, there are many causes , like gases and garbage.

But the one in this case is the waste of energy , caused by our heavy reliance on technology in our daily lives , like recharging our phones and batteries, heating devices and many electrical appliances , this causes damage to the environment that could cause problems in the near Future.

Things that we can do to help this situation are to use solar panels, because the solar Energy is a more healthy type of energy we can use to support out electrical technology and not depend always of electricity.

Another thing should be replacing heating systems because some waste a lot of energy and are made with cheap materials that cause more harm than good to the environment, so we should support heating systems that are more environment friendly for our sake.

But it's easier said than done, because we are a few Who takes this seriously, the government should Also do something about this problem because It affect us all, supporting funds to have more solar panels, because this panels take more time to be Fund to be used and there are few of them

If we don't do anything there Won't be anything we can do to help, this Is our only home and we must protect it after all.

Bravo Ramirez Jesus Antonio

The world is changing every day, but all we can find is in a good way. There are various possibilities for how this can happen and it’s in us to reduce all of this.

Firstly, getting subsidized solar panels is a good way to reduce pollution, because most of us use devices that consume a lot of energy and affect the environment, especially the ozone layer. This is because the sun’s rays are strongly getting inside the world. But you know that this takes decades to pay, and for that reason, we need the participation of the government. If you see someone using all these devices, it is important to take responsibility for this that you do understand and only want their best, therefore, getting subsidized solar panels.

Secondly, getting free insulation is the best way to avoid heat, sound, or electricity from escaping or entering. It this important the government takes part in it because if they give us all that equipment, we will get less pollution and will be comfortable in our sites. Also, if we have someone who hates the city sound, could be an excellent way for them, especially for our grandfathers.

In my opinion, it is extremely important to take care of our environment, but sometimes it is not only necessary for us to participate in the change of a better world, but we also need the help of the government and our authorities for the great change that we want to see.

Flores Palomino Lisset (group 1)

Recently the problem that our land has in relation to its care and protection is so notorious, so we also see that there is a need to take care of the use of energy and see its production in order to be more respectful with the environment. this is necessary to take into account since the environment is what helps us to live. Some ideas that will help energy production and use while taking care of the environment are: Subsidized solar panels and replacement heating systems .

 Solar panels are of great help to generate electricity, thus promoting sustainability. This is because it allows people to have electricity naturally, that is, through sunlight, without having to resort to another means of energy.

Although acquiring these solar panels has a cost. Today, in different countries, solutions are shown so that money is not a problem and everyone can comply with protecting the environment in relation to energy.