Vocabulary

The Misty Moon lays deep inside the atmosphere.

The abysmal, pitch black sky, was like the eerie, and mysterious dark sea.

the big bell rang out across the land like a lion roaring in the jungle

The castle's turrets were cutting through the air like daggers piercing skin.

the dark,misty fog loomed over us as it moved round the castle

The eerie abysmal sky, shadowed down at the old stone castle.

-Aanya

the stony castle crumbled as seconds went by, its edges stuck together with moss as brown and old as the earth

The moon was like a glistening bubble slowly floating across the night sky.

-Lydia

The moon glistened in the pitch black sky.

The moon was as white as a blank sheet of paper in

 a classroom.

the fog was as thick as a brick wall

The moon was as gloomy as the night sky in the abbys.

The moon was casting an ominous light over the ancient castle.

The moon had a slight flicker of glimmer sparkling in the dark of the night.

It was as if the moon was dangleing above my head on long thin puppet strings

-Lydia

The glistening moon

 towered across the gloomy castle

the moon watched over the castle like a spy.

The shiny,blank moon was the only light exposing the dark,gloomy castle.

the mist was climbing the mountains

Gazing

eerie

atmosphere

Castle

Moon

The old moat surrounded the castle like the last soldier in an army

As the trees reached down, i walked to the forbidden castle

The snowy topped mountains formed a circle around the castle like an ambush ready to strike

as the mountain caved around the castle

Out in courtyard the uneven paving creaked as it moved from side to side crumbling as time went by

the moat inclosed the castle from the nearby forest

-Lydia

The grand mountains loomed over the castle

The rigged trees reached the quiet eerie castle, creating scary shadows.

the cold, grey castle balanced carefully on top of the mountain

as i walked around the ancient castle i saw trees that felt like they were thousands of years old with its dark mysterous look. The fog crept around the castle like a grim raeper with murdeos intent. Ready to slay his next victim wit

The old rocking chair seemed to have a mind of its own, as it swayed I realised none of the windows were open...

The mountains were as if it was protecting the castle

The trees seemed to strangle the castle and the mountains hid it from sight

The dead,bare trees were twisting, almost reaching for something like a vicious witch.

The skeleton like tree's next to the castle had Crows cawing in danger.

-Darcey

In the basment,

the castle was being strangled by the amount of tall,strong trees in the shadows.

 In th moat

Around the castle

The fog was thick, gloomy and grey

The inside of the building was as gloomy and old as a dead knight just awakening from his grave.

as the moon raised,

suddenly,

In the crypt,

Without warning,

Inside the deathly dungen,

-Darcey

The inside was a grand as a hotel.

step by step,

as i walked through,

when the moon came to its top point,

As the clock struck midnight,

fronted adverbials

(where, when, how)

Around the walls of the castle,

Through the gate,

The hallway made me feel like it was closing in creating a claustrophobic effect.

The inside of the building had old ivy wrapped red carpets that have`nt been touched for centuries

The turrets stood there standing looking into the void like forest.

The hallway was as if it was closing in on me and sucking me in.

The insides were black like soul of the castle.

-Darcey

The sticks cracked as i took each step

The castle seemed to get bigger and bigger as I got closer looming over me as if it was daring me to come in.

The gigantic castle was looming over the ground creating an abysmal shadow.

inside

The trees were swaying like it was trying to rip out my soul.

-Darcey

The place felt like a foggy mess of a horrible old, ancient, terrifiying place

The gloomy ,eerie trees hiding the old haunted castle as if it was protecting it

The old trees reached out with every step I took. As the eerie lanterns swayed in the wind the abysmal sea absorbed the moonlight.

the turrets pearced the sky like a knife

The ancient, old castle stood there like a gloomy siolder barely trying to move.

The castle was covered with ivy

and it was dead quiet and eerie.

-Aanya

The ivy wraped around the castle like a hungry snake.

The old, grand castle loomed over me and the shadows of the turrets seemed to try and scare me away

the grand castle towered over the trees

The moonlit castle