Descriptive Writing 4E Burger

 Sam your burger is delicious but the ingredients need to be arranged properly if it was arranged properly and if you could take a bun again and place it on it. The burger would be excellent.

The burger is disarranged. The reason Sam's burger is disarranged as the order should be like this - bun, tomato, lettuce, cheese, patty, and bun. He could add some onion, a small quantity of mayo, and ketchup.

Esther

It is bad because the burger is not arranged properly Sam should first put the lower bun then he should put the delicious meat on top of the lower bun after that he should put the red tomatoes then he should put the lettuce on top of the tomatoes and put the cheese finally put the upper bun and your yummy burger is ready to serve.🍔🍔

Hisham Feedback-Bad Cook

1. not arranged in a proper way Because the cheese is in the 1 place and the bun is upside down.

2. 1 you need to put the bun then the patty after that some lettuce lastly put the bun.

Reviews about of Sam's burger.

Sam's burger is not in order so he have to arrange in order like the bun on top and the celery should be placed next to bun with Patti in the middle then cheese next to it. finally add another bun at the end.

saadia 4E 1. i said to sam that your burger is delicious, but it is not arranged proper order.

     Sam's burger has the right ingredients but all the places of the ingredients are jumbled up.But It looks very delicious.

      To make the burger better Sam can put the burger bun on the top then put red tomatoes after that put the delicious cheese then the chicken patty and then the green and healthy lettuce and finally cover it with the other part of the bun.

"It looks kind of awkward"

the burger looks out of place as the bun is at the wrong place so how will people eat it? The right way of making the burger is to first put the flat bun, then add the lettuce then the cheese, then the tomatoes then the chicken then finally the curved bun

Sowmith 4E

Sam's burger needs to be arranged🌮🌮🥐🧀🥩🤗 the

bun should go up and the base bun should be placed at the bottom.

The burger should be in proper order by putting the bun on top and the chicken after the bun and some tomatoes and cheese Steve

He needs to order the ingredients like : Bun, Cheese, Tomato, Patty, Lettuce, Cheese, Bun.

The burger was good and the burger had the right things but the odder is wrong.

Sam's burger is arranged wrong

Sam can improve his burger by arranging the burger in the correct order 🍔🍔🍔🍔🍔

sams burger is aranged wrong

he doesn't no to make burger

first put the bread then chese,tomato,patei,anthor slice of bread Nathan 4E

 Vyom

1) OK

2) It looks ok as he did not keep it in proper order

3) He can make it better by keeping the ingredients in order

Sam's burger is not arranged properly and he can arrange his burger in a proper order

Sam's burger will be delicious. He needs to order the ingredients like this: Bun, Cheese, Tomato, Patty, Lettuce, Cheese, Bun. Word - Tasty

 Sam's burger is not good because a burger should start with a bread and end with it.

Mixed-up

The bun should go on top and the bread should go on the bottom and everything else goes in the middle in any order

Mouth watering chicken burger combo

The chicken burger looks very delicious and tempting.It has crispy chicken burger in it with lots of yummy cheese and fries. However if there is a little more garlic paste and lettuce it get the world's most delicious burger award. HAMMAD