Descriptive Writing 4G_Burger

SHARINIE .T 4G

1. CRUNCHY

2. THE BURGER IS NOT IN AN SEQUENTIAL ORDER. IT WOULD BE MORE JUICY AND DELICIOUS, IF ARRANGED IN A PROPER ORDER

3. SAM HAS TO ARRANGE THE DELICIOUS BURGER IN THIS ORDER SO THAT IT TASTES MORE GOOD . I SHARINIE WILL HELP SAM TO ARRANGE HIS BURGER

1. START FROM THE BOTTOM WITH A LIGHTLY TOASTED BUN

2. ADD AT LEAST A TEASPOON OF YOUR CHOSEN SAUSE .

3. LETTUCE COMES NEXT

4. THICK SLICES OF TOMATO

5. THE STAR ,SAM'S BURGER PATTY WITH MELTED CHEESE

6. PICKLES AND ONIONS SETTLE NICELY ON THAT MELTED CHEESE .

Sam did not put the burger in

Right order .

1 he need to put the bun.

2 he need to put the patty

3 he need to put the cheese.

4 he need to put the lettuce.

5 he need to put the bun.

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HARIS 4G

First He put The down bun with tomatoes and put the top bun

Up and sam's burger will be perfect.

Veda-4G

1. Sam's burger is very tasty and a mouth watering burger.

2. his burger is not in order

3. Step 1-we have to put a bun on the bottom.

Step 2-we have to place patty.

Step 3-we have to put lettuce.

step 4-we have to place cheese.

Step 5-we have to put tomatoes.

Step 6-we have to place some onions.

Step 7-we have to put the other bun on the top.

Asma Firdous 4G

A1-wrong

A2-he put it in the wrong order

A3-he can change the burger by:

put the lettuce on top the bottom bun the some slices of tomato on top then the patty more lettuce then the top bun

Mohammaed zayan-Incorrect,sam's burger is incorrect beacause he hasnt put the ingriedients correctly.the second piece of the bread first.Then put the piece of lettuce on the top.then put the cheese on top of the patty and put it on lettuce's top then put the tomato slices and finally put the other slice of the bread and viola the burger is ready

Neelima Levin 4G- A1- Wrong A2- Because Sam made burger with the right ingredients but all ingredients went mixed up (it is not in proper order).A3- yes I would suggest making the burger just like I say first put the bottom bread🍞, lettuce🍀, tomato🍅, cheese🧀, burger patty then put top bread🍞 and repeat the process again.🍔

1. BAD.

2.THIS IS BAD BECAUSE THE

BURGER IS NOT IN A PROPER

ODER BECAUSE IT IS NOT IN

ODER.

3.TO MAKE BETTER LOOKING

BURGER HE SHOULD PUT ALL

IN A ODER.

1) Arrangement

2) Its all bonkers( mixed

3) Arrangement of ingredients like bun on the top cheese,patty,leaves and tomato ofcourse bun again . But in my opinion modserella cheese

Hareet 4G

1. Different

2. Because it is jumbled

3.2nd part on last 5

Sam has tried his best. And for the first if he has tried it good. So I suggest him to put every thing in order like the bun should first .Second he should put the cheese third should come the patty and then the lettuce then finally the tomato and then close it up with a bun.

RIDA WAHEED 4G

JOHAN 4G 1 WRONG

2 IT IS WRONG BECAUSE THE MATERIALS IS NOT ARRANGED

PROPERLY

3. I WILL TELL HIM TO ARANGGE IT AND ALSO ADD FRENCH FRIES AND SAUCE

AADHITYA ANOOP 4G

1.Inappropriate

2.It is not in the correct order

3.It can be better by

.First put the top of the burger at the top.

.Then the tomato below it.

.After that but cheese.

.Then lettuce leaf.

.Meat.

.Finally put the bottom of the burger.

Hritvika Kandel:- 4G

1. Decent

2. His burger needs improvement. Most parts of the burger are jumbled and are not in order.

3. Sam can make his burger better by first putting the bun, put the cheese then add the tomatoes, after put the patty and along with it add the spinach. Lastly add the 2nd piece of bun then done.

Nathan:

First take a buger bun which has no seed

Second take chicken

third take cheese

fourth take lettuce

fifth take tomato

sixth take onion

Finally take a bun which has seeds

Here is your recipe sam and if you don't know how to make buger Call me

RAFA SHEIKH

1)REVIWE SAMS BURGER -REARRANGE IT.

2)EVIDENCE-HE SHOULD REARRANGE IT AND MY EVIDENCE IS IT IS NOT LOOKING NICE.

3)SAMS BURGER LOOK BETTER BY - PUTTING THE FLAT BUN FIRST THEN LATUS, HAM , CHEESE, TOMATO,BUN.

Kunsh.

1.Jumbled

2.Because he has putted the veggies and the bread in wrong place

3.1st he can put the bread then he can put cheese now he can put 1 vegetables then the pattie now again the 1 now put the cheese and lastly the bread finally serve it.

Rebecca Tittu 4G

A1. Improper

A2. The bun,cheese and lettuce are all in improper places that's why it is improper

A3. Sam can change the burger by putting the lettuce in the middle, the bun on top and the cheese on top of the lettuce.

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the burger is

not in order

AVIV ISSAC -4G

The food quality is good but the the ingredients are not put in the right way.My opinion is he should know where to put the ingredients in the right way and packed in the right way too......